Tuesday, June 21, 2005

Judith Heartsong Entry

If my hot silver tears created a shimmering path to a pure, brilliant white cloak of safety, I’d let them sweep away the molten black cries of your sorrowful heart; which causes you to spill crimson red in an effort to ease your desperate blues.

 

Read all of the entries in Judith's contest here: http://journals.aol.com/judithheartsong/newbeginning/entries/1469

7 comments:

  1. now all you need is the link to her in the entry.

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  2. ah....very good.   And you did follow the rules, she said that poems and prose were ok.

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  3. http://journals.aol.com/judithheartsong/newbeginning/entries/1469

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  4. All I can say is, WOW!  Lisa  :-]  

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  5. Very nice!  Good luck in the contest.  Now, get that link to Judi's site edited in there before midnight tonight.
    Sam

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  6. Oh Lisa.... this is a beautiful and powerful piece, and the photograph is somehow perfect. I am so glad that you wrote..... wow, where have you been all these months? This resonates so deeply. Thank you. judi

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  7. I completely MISSED this in Judis' comment box !!  

    This is a completely different aspect for the contest !!

    SPells out depression in a nutshell !!  KEEP the White cloak of safety ALWAYS!

    Stacy

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